2033 Lifestyle and it`s problems Article

 2033 Lifestyle and it`s problems

The world seems to be advancing on technology everyday, we already have amazing objects, but studies show that in 2033 it will be a lot better, but there will be some problems.
  
Good things in 2033 

1.- Education program for all the countires will be a lot better to all the children out there, because they will be able to activate online classes whenever they want to, in their houses!

2.- Transportation will be a lot faster, because of the new train and buses, they will be better organized and there will be more streets with more space.


3.- Technology will be amazing with  lot more objects and features. also. the new mobile- phones  such as the Iphone 27 and galaxy S26 will never lose signal.

Bad things in 2033 

1.- Over population will be the most important problem in that year there will b a lot of people around the world and the production of food will have a lot of problems because of this.



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Task Correction

 New rules that changed a school

                        There is an academy in the UK called "Allsop Academy" it is having a lot of success by changing the Headteacher, to a more traditional one, his nme is Michael Watson. This new headteacher has been introducing new rules for the school, these rules are: Students cant go to fas-food shops, they have to wear ties, pullovers and short hair, the have to do their homewoek or hey will have to stay in school after classes, the have to use th correct pair of shoes and they cant use their mobile-phones; also, they have to wait lined up before the class starts.

                        Before Michael Watson came to the school, it was having a lot of problems, so my opini about this school is that they made the correct decicions to make the school a better place to study. Personally i think that one of the most important decicions that they made was to repair the old buildings.

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 Wednesday 16th october 2013 

 Yesterday me and some friends were playing football like at 12o' clock, we were having a lot of fun. I was scoring a lot of goals...as always..., I was pretty entertained.

My turn to be the goalkeeper arrived and I was on my way to the goal post when I saw a lot of coins on the grass, I asked my friends if it was their money, but it wasnt, s I took it, it was $5000 pesos in coins!

I am planning to spend it in candies and sodas in the school`s kisoko, $5000 pesos are a lot in te school, you can buy a lot of things, I`m so happy because I found that money, but I know that I will have to buy things for my friends, because if they see you what that amount of money they will ask you to buy things for them.


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Trinity Tasks final edition DeluXe

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Trinity Task

             
                    Surprise party

   
 A month ago, my class  organised a surprise party for a friend of us, we talked with his parents about this surprise party and they let us have the party a friday at evening in his house.

 we had to prepare all the food, music and all the birthday stuff, we also had to prepare how we would get into his house without being discovered by him.

We were in his house like 30 minutes before him so we had some time to organise the details, and we planned  how to surprise him when he enter to his house.

When he arrived, he enter to the house and we Scream: HAPPY BIRTHDAY!, he was so happy and he had a great party.

I think he loved the party

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                                My trip to universal and Island of adventures. 

My flight to Miami was pretty good, I slept a lot, so it was really fast, I didnt become bored at all. 

When I arrived to Miami I felt awesome!, we ( my family) met a funny female police officer, it was funny to hear my dad trying to talk in english, I had to help there. 

The next day we visited Universal Studios, I jumped in to the biggest rollercoaster I have ever seen in my life, i´ts was awesome. 

The next day we visited the Island of Adventures, the only thing i wanted to do there was to jump in to the     "HulK" an awesome rollercoaster. 

I just want to visit these places again, they are so awesome, I totally recommend them. 

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Trinity task

                                          Football or Basketball?




Today at the finals of SIBL (Super international basketball league) Celtics Vs MKP finished 108:113, but this score is a lie.

Bartholomeo(MKP) Scored the last goal by kicking the ball from the middle of the field, this is totally unacceptable, because it is a penalty for the other team, this means that Celtics could have won the tournament.

As you may know ( you are the organizers, you have to know this) kicking the ball isnt allowed, and it is red card for the player that did it.

I think you have to add cameras to record a video and with this you will be able to watch the polemic play easily



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                                                                                                     29/06/13

Hey Jungi!

It's strange that you want to be a televisor presenter, but It's OK!

I think you might have some problems talking in public, you have to know taht you will be talking live, to a lot of people. this might be a problem for you, but for solving it you have to be prepared and obviously you have to study in a good university.

If you put a lot of effort on ths you will be successful      

see you!

Vicente González



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My common grammar mistakes and Glossary

Name: Vicente González Date: wednesday 21st of August 2013 Grade:8th ISE-1 Mistake N°1: "roolleercooaster" Correction:Rollercoaster Grammar rule: Spelling Explanation of the Grammar rule: "To write the word with the correct number of letters" Two new examples:(Correct spelling of words) 1.- unaceptavle (WRONG) -----> unacceptable (GOOD) 2.-Acomodate(WRONG)-----> Accommodate (GOOD) 2 Links to practice: http://www.englisch-hilfen.de/en/exercises/languages/spelling.htm http://esl.about.com/library/listening/bllis_beg_spelling.htm Mistake N°2: "People is having" Correction: people are having Grammar rule: Collocation (Sir Julio told me this) Explanation of the grammar ruler: http://esl.fis.edu/grammar/rules/colloc.htm To new examples: you is playing (WRONG) -----> You are playing (GOOD) She are beautiful(WR0NG)-----> She is beautiful (GOOD) Links to practice: http://www.better-english.com/strongcoll.htm http://www.englishexercises.org/makeagame/viewgame.asp?id=2394 Mistake N°3: "I didnt did my homework" Correction: I didn´t do my homework Grammar rule: past tence Explanation of the grammar rule: http://www.englishpage.com/verbpage/simplepast.html Two new examples: I see you yesterday(WRONG)---> I saw you yesterday(GOOD) I were playing football(WRONG)---> I was playing football(GOOD) Exercises: http://www.myenglishpages.com/site_php_files/grammar-exercise-simple-past.php http://english.lingolia.com/en/grammar/tenses-comparison/past-tenses/exercises/articles/past-tenses-mixed-exercise

Trinity, section 2 task 4

How to plan the perfect party.

A lot of people is having some problems with their parties, because the people that go to it become really bored, here you will find some awesome ideas for your party!

First we need to know why a party might be not successful, the answers are really simple,they dont know the music that their friends like or they invite the wrong people, so if you want to have a successful party you have to know the interests of the community.

Ideas:

1.- Have the correct music

2.- Have awesome food and drinks

3.- You need a big space for dancing

Trinity Task, email.

To: Martin.Lutero@yahoo.org

Subject: amazing sports competitions

Hey!,

I was reading twitter, and I read that in one week the football departament of Chile will organize a tournament, 8 teams can play in it! and the winner will meet Cristiano Ronaldo!

I think we have good football skills, but we need at least 6 players, so if you can send an email to your friends telling them about the tournament, it would be awesome.

The tournament will be played at the national stadium.

Thank you!

VIDEOOOO :DDD

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3AWP0Qhn5WI&feature=youtu.be

Pictures, Healthy Lifestyle and junk food in the school

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Nutritions problems in Schools at Spain
More than 2000 children in schools at Barcelona,Spain were having nutritions problems



The news that I read speaks about the bad nutrition that 2865 children were having in some Schools of Barcelona, Spain.

Some of the children arrived to the school without eating Breakfast, and they were having bad marks in the school, they weren’t studying and they felt really bad while in classes.

The headmaster of a school called Sant Josep Oriol, Nuria Garcia, said that they were detecting serious problems of nutrition in the students, she said that one morning a student came to her office, and told her that he was with a really bad pain in his stomach and then she found out that the last thing the child ate, was a slice of bread at 7PM.

All these students started with a strong nutrition program after being examined by doctors, the government is helping a lot these Children so they can recover their forces and try to finish the year with decent marks and results in their exams that is one of the most important things in the life of a child, aswell as his or her nutrition.

The Spanish government thinks that this is a very serious problem, and they have to work hard to fix it out. 



















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Foods to Limit at school
Ways to help the students to grow healthy

There is a guide called “Canada’s Food Guide” this guide recommends the school to not sell foods and beverages that are high in calories.

The school usually sells a lot of junk food, some examples are: Potato chips, French fries, Nachos, Fruit flavoured drinks, Candy, Ice cream, Cakes and pastries and Donuts. All this food must have a limit in the schools, because  this type of food provides fewer nutrients needed to grow and if a child eats a lot of this food, he or she will be fat.

The Canada’s food guide gives us possibilities that we can use to change the junk food in schools. For example:

Ice cream ----> Freezing yogurt or 100% fruit or vegetable juice in a popsicle tray

Potato Chips--->  Choosing plain popcorn or homemade baked pitas

Fruit flavored drinks---> adding lime or lemon to your water or choosing milk, fortified soy beverage or 100% vegetable or fruit juice

Donuts---> Making your own low fat mini muffins with added fibre

Cakes and Pastries---> A baked apple with cinnamon, graham crackers or fruit and yogurt to satisfy your sweet tooth

French fries---> Baking strips of potato or sweet potatoes  in your oven with a small amount of oil herbs and spices.

Tobacco Problems in schools

The schools can help a lot in terms of helping the students to stay tobacco free.

It is very important that the schools help in this area, because the tobacco can cause a lot of bad health effects, one of the most dangerous ones is the Lung cancer, if you smoke tobacco for a long period of time, you have 70% possibilities to get this cancer and this can obviously kill you.

The other bad part about the tobacco use in schools, is that this produces a “Gateway” to the illegal drug use, for example:

-Marihuana

-Heroin

-Cocaine

If the tobacco use continues, more than 6.3 million of kids under 18 who are alive, today, will

Ultimately die from a Smoking-Related disease.

But, How can the schools help?

The schools can provide comprehensive Tobacco education, The schools can also forbid tobacco use by students, staff and visitors on all school grounds and at all school-sponsored events, provide program-specific training for teachers, Involve parents and families in school efforts to prevent tobacco use and finally offer interactive tobacco free projects for the students.

Gaming Industry presentation

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LETTER

                                                                                                                           Mackay School

 Avenida Vickuña

Mackena, 666 Viña

del Mar

Pepperdinde 

School, Malibu 

Old-Street 567

  24/04/13

                   Dear Sir, 

             I`m a 14 years old student form chile, I`m studying in a British school called Mackay School (it is just for boys) since a couple of years. I really think that I know a lot of english, I write decent , but I need to improve my pronunciation. 

           Next year, I would like to course a semester, so if you can tell me how much this will cost, I would be really grateful.

  Your Sincerely, 

. Vicente González Valenzuela

    

Andrew Lane Interview :D

Church jumble sale: Sale of unwanted or used things.

Hooked: Addicted.

Sideline: Second Occupation.

Whether: Conjuntion that means "If".

Attendance: The number of people present at a certain place.

Attempting: Trying to do.

Chemistry: The science that deals with the composition and properties of substances and various elementary forms of matter.

1.-How did Andrew became hooked on Sherlock Holmes Stories? 

He became hooked by buying the first Sherlock Holmes book "A study in Scarlet".

2.-Was Sherlock Holmes a real person?

No, Arthur Conan Doyle wanted to create a character for his books and the character was Sherlock Holmes.

3.- Why was Andrew been criticized by some of Arthur Conan Doyle`s fans?

Most of the Arthur Conan Doyle`s fans are concervative so they just want to read Books about Sherlock`s Adventures ( when adult ), and Andrew wrote the Sherlock`s adventures when Sherlock was a child so all these concervative fans got "angry". 

Young Sherlock Holmes Review!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bKrsARCMtixg7sU4_UYlUN2ovAc0J2BPfc6qylRjce0/edit?usp=sharing

Link of Sherlock's letter!!!!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xnJWA-4Y5puA1_wrwvP4BSx3hOMCpL6B4VV6CqOsY94/edit?usp=sharing

LINK

https://voicethread.com/?#u2770836.b4380009.i22332302

Holidays

1: I would choose the third one ‘What I did on my holiday’  

2: I think it is the most entertaining one of the four options, and it looks more for children and teens 

3: She would be a person called "Flo Yao" because... ok I dont know why but it would be awesome to go with her 
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