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 New rules that changed a school

                        There is an academy in the UK called "Allsop Academy" it is having a lot of success by changing the Headteacher, to a more traditional one, his nme is Michael Watson. This new headteacher has been introducing new rules for the school, these rules are: Students cant go to fas-food shops, they have to wear ties, pullovers and short hair, the have to do their homewoek or hey will have to stay in school after classes, the have to use th correct pair of shoes and they cant use their mobile-phones; also, they have to wait lined up before the class starts.

                        Before Michael Watson came to the school, it was having a lot of problems, so my opini about this school is that they made the correct decicions to make the school a better place to study. Personally i think that one of the most important decicions that they made was to repair the old buildings.

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 Wednesday 16th october 2013 

 Yesterday me and some friends were playing football like at 12o' clock, we were having a lot of fun. I was scoring a lot of goals...as always..., I was pretty entertained.

My turn to be the goalkeeper arrived and I was on my way to the goal post when I saw a lot of coins on the grass, I asked my friends if it was their money, but it wasnt, s I took it, it was $5000 pesos in coins!

I am planning to spend it in candies and sodas in the school`s kisoko, $5000 pesos are a lot in te school, you can buy a lot of things, I`m so happy because I found that money, but I know that I will have to buy things for my friends, because if they see you what that amount of money they will ask you to buy things for them.


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